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Reviews For And He Had Thought He Was Free...
This is a good one! I wish there were more stories like this but this is one of my favorites out of what I've seen! I'd love to see what Harry's friends reactions would be, as well as the reaction of the world in general. And, of course, to see how Harry and Snape both struggle to adjust. Thanks for sharing 💜💜💜
My advice is, when something takes that many paragraphs to explain, it would be worth simplifying it, and maybe break the information up a bit--like for example, have Albus give them a basic overview/the bottom line first, and further details could come up in conversation later. That said, I think it's a good start, and I look forward to reading more.
Regards.
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