| Title: What Severus Snape Saw
| 13 Apr 2015 2:47 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I am sorry you took my comments as criticism it was not intended as such, I have never heard grass snakes, newts and crayfish called that!
Very good chapter thank you
Author's Response: Lol it's ok, I didn't take it as criticism, I just didn't want anybody to think I was making things up lol.
| Title: What Severus Snape Saw
| 12 Apr 2015 8:35 am
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| Reviewer: Lea (Anonymous)
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It's so great, that Severus eventyaully has seen
Harry, as he is. I nhope, that you have something in store for them, also after the camp...
I would like it eventual guardian-story vrry much.
I will be waiting for the rest of the chapters.
| Title: What Severus Snape Saw
| 12 Apr 2015 7:22 am
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| Reviewer: A-zla (Anonymous)
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Two great chapters, again! I loved the gillyweed scene. I'm looking forward to reading more!
| Title: What Severus Snape Saw
| 12 Apr 2015 5:37 am
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| Reviewer: Nesmay (Anonymous)
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Thank you, thank you, thank you! God I love this story but suppose I'll have to be patient to see what happens next. Well done writing this!
| Title: What Severus Snape Saw
| 12 Apr 2015 5:35 am
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| Reviewer: Demi (Anonymous)
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Brilliant story! I love your style of writing, the slow building relationship is very realistic. The wait for the next chapter will be well worth it :)
| Title: What Severus Snape Saw
| 12 Apr 2015 1:40 am
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| Reviewer: alexander (Anonymous)
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Very very well written! This is... Wow!
| Title: What Severus Snape Saw
| 11 Apr 2015 11:05 pm
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| Reviewer: Gryffinclaw (Anonymous)
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Can't remember my log in, but had to leave a review. Great story so far and thank you for the speedy updates. Can't wait to see what happens next. Maybe Snape and Harry will win the race? It would be nice to see him get a bike of his own. Any plans to explore how this affects Snape/Harry's relationship once back in the wizarding world? Again, great story.
I'm glad that Harry got his courage together and swan across the lake. He needed that boost of confidence. Severus' reaction when Harry tried to cover himself with the towel was nice, too.
| Title: What Severus Snape Saw
| 11 Apr 2015 6:54 pm
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| Reviewer: Saphron (Anonymous)
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im really really loving this story..,can't wait for the next chapter! 😀
AWWWwwwww that was a great chapter! Love it. Great to see harry start to gain confidence.
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