Good story!
I also like the way you ended.
Xx
I like the story very much, even it was a bit short, I wanted to be a very long story. I didn't want to be finished.
I like your writings, the flow of the stories, the characters, the realistic behavior.
Thank you very much.
I just about sobbed all through those last few chapters. Well done.
Really liked the bit about meeting Harry and getting away from that Potter boy he didn't like. :)
the end was.......... fast.
I am glad I read this fic. Lovely, I like how fast you went in the end, and how Harry later became his fully adopted son. Lovely Lovely Lovely!!
And even though i want a sequel, i won't pressure you, or even ask for one, still, it was ONE OF THE best fics I have ever read! Loved it!!
Don't tell me that Severus would bring Harry a bike, would he?
So, well, I guess most of us authors are same, aren't we? We like tormenting our main characters so much that the readers get frustrated...............
I loved how you said the scars as reasons, 24 scars and 24 reasons. A very beautiful description, I love a 'realisation hit' Snape, and this gave me exactly that! Keep going!
so, I guess you gave up on the idea of Snape being mean? Because that's good, I don't like a mean Snape after he has developed an understanding.
|