Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Wish Granted 13 Nov 2015 1:42 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    This is one of my all-time favorites! Such a lovely story

    Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Title: Wish Granted 29 Sep 2015 7:28 am
Reviewer: rosiegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    A very good story. I liked that his life was rewritten so he got his wish.

    Author's Response: Thank you. :-) I'm glad that you liked this. It was fun rewriting Harry's life, a little. 
Title: Waking Only to Dream 19 Sep 2015 11:42 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    This is awesome! i love the premise and how it is working. Wonderful. :)

    Author's Response: Thank you so much. :-) I'm glad that you like the premise of this, and how it's working. I hope that you find the rest of the story enjoyable. 
Title: Falling 19 Sep 2015 11:31 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Cute start! Poor little Harry! So sweet.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that you liked the start of this. 
Title: Wish Granted 05 Sep 2015 7:21 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    *applauds* Wonderful close, DOC. And such a darling story all around. Only problem is that now I want more of this little family! I love how you have depicted how they interact with one another while still remaining true to who they each are as characters. Very masterfully pieced together - though, I've come to expect such excellent writing from you!

    Love it, love it, love it! 10/10!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much. I am happy that you enjoyed this. :-) I did enjoy writing for this little family, and if the muse is so inclined, I wouldn't mind writing more for them. 

    Thank you for all of the wonderful feedback. It has made my day, and refreshed me as well.  

Title: Avoiding Sleep 05 Sep 2015 7:14 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    You say... you say there's no pairing between our guys, but then you do something like have Remus put a hand on Sev's arm and mollify him with a single line and my shipper heart! My shipper heart, DOC, it doesn't believe you!

    Totally in love with your portrayal of this little family. It's just so wonderful - even how Severus and Sirius still don't quite get along but somehow do at the same time - absolutely well-portrayed. Bravo.

    Author's Response:

    I do ship these guys, but wasn't sure if others would appreciate it, so I leave that up to the reader to interpret.  I am very happy that you caught those little nuances of touch -- for some reason the muse insisted on them, even though I tried hard to keep it gen. I didn't want to be overt with the relationship, though, in my head, it was there.

    I was hoping that the characters wouldn't come across as OOC, given who I was gathering together be Harry's new family. I think that Sirius and Severus will always feel a little animosity for each other. 

    THANK YOU! 

Title: Waking Only to Dream 05 Sep 2015 6:42 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    AWWWWWWWWWWW. I like that even MORE. Piecing together different wishes and how it /was/ the teacher who had some part in all this. It makes me sooo happy.

    Author's Response: I am glad that you like how this worked out. I think, sometimes, different wishes can come together and make something bigger than they can as individual wishes. I am happy that you are happy. :-D
Title: Falling 05 Sep 2015 6:29 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    WAS MRS. ADAMS' A WITCH? *coughs* I mean, like, I can't help but ponder the idea, y'know? Maybe she was witch and created some sort of portkey-like-thing for Harry. Granted, I find it infinitely more likely that we have wish magic or some other phenomenon happening here, but still.

    In any case, this was a wonderful and rather sweet first chapter; looking forward to reading the rest!

    Author's Response:

    Mrs. Adams might have been a squib. Perhaps. She was one of those teachers who sees and knows and just cares. I like the idea of a portkey-like-thing created for Harry. Something to ponder for a future fic that may or may not be written. 

    Thank you so much. I wasn't sure how this would all come together, and am glad to hear that it turned into a nice first chapter. :-) 

Title: Wish Granted 07 Aug 2015 3:24 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely ending I was worried it would be a dream! Thank you

    Author's Response: I'm happy that you liked the ending. I don't like most stories that end with everything having been a dream, so I can understand why that would be a rather disappointing thought. Thank you so much! 
Title: Avoiding Sleep 07 Aug 2015 3:20 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved every sentence thank you

    Author's Response: Thank you! :D This makes me very happy to hear. 

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