| Title: Until then it's everything that remains...
| 31 Mar 2016 12:09 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved it but confused is it Christmas Day or the day before which is Christmas Eve?
Author's Response: I'm sorry, I'll correct it, it is on Christmas Day :)
| Title: Until then it's everything that remains...
| 27 Mar 2016 1:16 pm
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| Reviewer: Tim (Anonymous)
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You need a beta. I got halfway but the English is quite frankly appalling. This is unfortunate as the premise sounds good. I hope you get a beta and are able to correct your numerous grammatical mistakes.
Author's Response: I've been looking for a beta since I started writing, but none of the betas I texted answered me :( I really was trying my best, you see, but English is not my first language. Thank you though for telling me your impressions :)
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