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Reviews For A Trip Into Town
Title: A Trip Into Town 27 Apr 2016 11:23 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastically done! Very enjoyable read. Thanks for writing it and for sharing it with us!

    Author's Response: Oh! Thank you very much. I am very happy you enjoyed reading my fic and wrote me a review.
Title: A Trip Into Town 27 Apr 2016 11:50 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it especially the picture you painted of Severus in the shop thank you

    Author's Response: Thank you very much! Yes, it was difficult to imagine him in such a colourful setting at first ;)
Title: A Trip Into Town 25 Apr 2016 7:36 pm
Reviewer: Twonky (Signed) [Report This]
    Tee hee. I love it!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad you do.
Title: A Trip Into Town 25 Apr 2016 8:48 am
Reviewer: Christine (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good, but use British English.

    Author's Response: Thank you. I am not a native english speaker. I tried to use British English, but I obviously failed. I'll try to improve.
Title: A Trip Into Town 24 Apr 2016 4:52 am
Reviewer: Missy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is really great for a first one-shot. Thanks for a genuine smile.

    Author's Response: Thank you. I am really happy it turned out fine. Being able to make someone smile, makes me very happy.
Title: A Trip Into Town 24 Apr 2016 4:44 am
Reviewer: Livia Ethelind (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg that was hilarious!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad you think so.
Title: A Trip Into Town 24 Apr 2016 4:33 am
Reviewer: retaco (Signed) [Report This]
    Really fun.. I particularly enjoyed the end with the electric shock to protect the sweets... Reyes

    Author's Response: Thank you very much! Yes, I was thinking Snape could be generous after Harry helped him. Or just be his sadistic self  ;)
Title: A Trip Into Town 24 Apr 2016 12:35 am
Reviewer: Dark Inu Fan (Signed) [Report This]
    All I worry about, is Harry's punishment (from Dudley or Vernon) for 'stealing' candy after Severus leaves. Otherwise, the imagery of Snape in a candy store is hilarious. Almost as gold as him willingly in WWW, buying supplies off the twins.

    Author's Response: Hm, you have given me food for thought. I could also imagine that Petunia would like to try to make them all forget the incident, since she doesn't want to be asked about knowing Snape. I wonder...Thank you! Well, now that would be hilarious to write or read! Makes me wonder if anyone has already written that story.
Title: A Trip Into Town 23 Apr 2016 7:25 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I enjoyed the idea of Harry running into Snape in the candy store. Severus probably thought Albus would enjoy Muggle candy for his birthday so it made sense. I especially like that Snape fixed Harry's candy so that Dudley couldn't take it. Nice job.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! Yes, that was exactly my reasoning for how they met! Albus is the only excuse I found, since I wouldn't usually put 'Severus' and 'candy store' in one sentence. Thank you, I always believed that Severus would be annoyed with Dudley if he had to deal with him.

    :)

Title: A Trip Into Town 23 Apr 2016 6:31 pm
Reviewer: Andrea (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Loved this! Very cute and fun story. Thank sor sharing it!!

    Author's Response: I am glad you did. Thank you for reading and writing a review!

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