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Reviews For A Trip Into Town
Title: A Trip Into Town 23 Apr 2016 4:53 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved the fast-paced unexpected surprises near the end! Great job! 😉

    Author's Response: Thank you very much! I have to admit they were a lot of fun to write ;-)
Title: A Trip Into Town 23 Apr 2016 3:42 pm
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    enjoyed reading this very much

    Author's Response: Thank you for telling me!
Title: A Trip Into Town 23 Apr 2016 9:59 am
Reviewer: alexander (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ohhh, i enjoyed this so much!

    Author's Response: Thank you. That makes me very happy!
Title: A Trip Into Town 23 Apr 2016 9:04 am
Reviewer: ohmysnape (Signed) [Report This]
    This was great! I laughed really hard when Harry was like "HE'S HANDING OUT SWEETS WHAT." If you took that little reference from canon, it's really great to see here-- I always found that line funny. And of course, the Snape snark was brilliant. Great job!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!

    Yay! Someone noticed! It was just too fitting not to add it here. I am really happy I could make you laugh with it.

    Writing snarky Snape turned out to be really fun ;)

    Thanks

Title: A Trip Into Town 22 Apr 2016 8:59 pm
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nicely written, with a very logical reason for them to meet.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    Finding a reason for them to meet was harder than I first thought. I am glad it worked.

     

Title: A Trip Into Town 22 Apr 2016 7:55 pm
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice, and lovely story. Harry and Snape's interaction outside of school was believable.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!

    I am happy it fits with the canon verse. It's what I was going for.

Title: A Trip Into Town 22 Apr 2016 6:15 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! You did a great job, especially for your first Harry Potter fic.

    I loved it! It was typical Snape snarkiness. lol

    Loved too when Dudley got zapped when he tried to steal Harry's candies.

    Good job.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you very much! I am glad you enjoyed it. It is a relief.

    Snape is surprisingly fun to write. I am happy I got it right.

    Dudley really gets enough sweets as it is ;)

    Thank you for reviewing!


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