Title: The Weasleys
| 26 Aug 2018 11:38 am
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Reviewer: Lola (Signed)
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I love that the Weasleys are making such an effort to make Blaise feel part of the family and are so serious about the adoption. Blaise will have a lot to learn and perhaps so do the Weasleys.
I liked reading more of Weasley children and continue to be awe-struck by your characterization and world-building.
Thank you for this chapter!
I hope the Weasleys can help Blaise relax a little, because I don’t think Blaise can go on like this for much longer.
Thank you for sharing another brilliant chapter!
Title: Short List
| 26 Aug 2018 11:36 am
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Reviewer: Lola (Signed)
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I love your characterization of Snape and the way he tries to help Blaise (and Harry).
I continue to be impressed with your ability to completely pull your readers into the world you have created.
Thank you for sharing your talent 😊.
Poor Blaise. Your excellent writing makes it easy to sympathise with him (and the other characters).
He has no idea what he’s getting into accepting the adoption. I hope Harry can help him, considering he has had a somewhat similar experience.
Anyway, thank you for this great chapter. I really enjoyed it.
Title: Not a Death Eater
| 26 Aug 2018 11:33 am
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Reviewer: Lola (Signed)
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I just reread your fic and noticed that I only left a review for Chapter 7 & 8, so I thought I would review the other chapters as well because I love them so much. I hope you don’t mind 😊.
I think your idea for this fic is very original and I think this chapter was a good introduction to the story and characters; I was interested and invested from the start. I really feel for Blaise.
Thank you for sharing this story. I very much appreciate it.
Sorry I am away and on my phone and it didn't put in my rating so I'll try again
Wonderful chapter thank you, I love how Molly is handling Blaize but a long way to go
Title: Little Brother
| 26 Apr 2018 2:06 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved it thank you. Poor Blaize such a lost boy
Thank you for making me cry. Please do so again soon
Another amazing chapter; you never fail to deliver compelling, honest characterizations and beautiful, original writing. Every chapter leaves me eager for more.
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