good chapter, I like how you characterized the characters Snape, who is one of my favorite characters, and Dudley above all is very similar to his version in the books but with a more detailed personality. Poor Harry did it hard. Who knows if over time Dudley will become friendlier and if Snape will understand how the Dursleys really are towards Harry.
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