| Title: Chapter 4
| 17 Apr 2022 4:21 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lump in the throat chapter. Poor Harry to have hope and then to loose it is as you correctly pointed out just dreadful.
Aah i need more! Poor Harry
Poor, poor Harry…
By the way you have Theodore’s name as Knott instead of Nott.
Okey, I created an account just to review you here, because I kinda like where you're going with the story! Finally someone who is not lightning the edges of Draco and Severus and is making them as petty as they were in canon. I am suffering so much because there are only four chapters but I am looking forward to your next ones!! Great job!
Poor, poor Harry…
By the way you have Theodore’s name as Knott instead of Nott.
Poor Harry, what an awful start to the year. Kind of like how Hermione’s year began, with no friends even though she was smart and amiable, albeit bossy. I am interested to see where it goes from here. Thanks for sharing this story thus far.
Hope things look up for harry
Thsi broke my heart so many times over … I’m currently crying
Please keep up the good work can wait for more!
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