Excellent. Nicely written, both plot-wise and character-wise. I liked how Harry's spirit appeared to thank Snape before he moved on :).
| Title: To live again
| 08 Jul 2007 2:20 pm
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| Reviewer: amanda (Anonymous)
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| Title: Breathing his last
| 05 Jul 2007 4:21 pm
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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I really liked the way that you opened this story, with Ron speaking about the Chudley Cannons. Nice style.
I really liked all the family-ness. How Harry has his closest friends living in the house with him to make it feel like a home, how Percy came back to his family. It's really sad that Bill decided not to have any children. :(
I really liked the letter, and Snape's reaction to it was very in character. Great ending. Thank you for sharing it!
i really liked this! I loved the setting and the fact that Snape told James that had Harry been in Slytherin, he would have loved him as his own. Wonderful. Thanks so much for sharing!
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