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Title: Learning to trust 19 Sep 2024 7:01 am
Reviewer: Marcs Tee (Signed) [Report This]
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Title: Learning to trust 15 Aug 2023 2:43 am
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved this.
Title: Learning to trust 13 Mar 2023 7:06 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Such a sweet chapter. I'm so glad that Harry got the things he needed, a place to stay in the summer and a mind healer. I love the connection and Snape and Harry are developing.

    The only thing I noticed that needs to be fixed is Percy Weasley's name. You listed it as Purcey or something.

    Great chapter! I loved it. Your Harry is so adorable and lovely. Thanks so much for the update.
Title: Learning to trust 07 Mar 2023 6:38 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a sweet short story. I didn’t expect the story to end there, but it leaves us in a nice and hopeful place.
Title: Learning to trust 07 Mar 2023 9:17 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a lovely story with an excellent ending!
Title: Beginning to heal 27 Feb 2023 12:48 pm
Reviewer: Draco Lucius Malfoy (Signed) [Report This]
    I cannot help but feel as though Professor Dumbledore would have found it amusing that his hair had been turned red, and would have told the student what they needed to do to improve their skills, or congratulate them on a spell well cast. Great story. I can't wait to see what you do next.
Title: Hope 26 Feb 2023 2:06 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice beginning! I liked how Harry got a letter from his mother before all the Hogwarts letters came. That has got to be a sweet connection to her for him.

    Too bad Harry couldn't get his school supplies ahead of time like everyone else. That's going to be a problem when he gets to Hogwarts.

    I love that Snape is the one to fetch Harry and rescue him. Snape is very gentle with Harry in this one, it's sweet to see. I guess seeing Harry's situation has made it impossible to be mean to Harry. And Harry is sweet too, asking if his cousin can come too. Awww.

    I'm glad that Harry got the healing he needed and the rest in the hospital wing.

    I really like your characterization of Snape, and Dumbledore is spot on. Well done.

    Good start!
Title: Beginning to heal 26 Feb 2023 2:00 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, this is such a sweet beginning. I'm so glad that Snape is playful and kind in his own way, even though Harry is a Gryffindor. Harry needs encouragement and acceptance. I wonder if his new dorm mates will be as welcoming as the teachers so far.

    I think we might be missing a paragraph between these two:

    Harry nodded, grateful for the kindness he had been shown. However, his curiosity soon got the better of him, and he turned to Albus with a hesitant expression. "When will I be sent back to my relatives, sir?"

    Not really believing the older man, Harry nodded anyway. He wondered when they would give up on him, but he figured he should go along with this whole thing until then. Until they figured out he wasn't really a wizard, just a freak.

    I really enjoyed this chapter, and seeing Harry explore his new situation. I'm glad that he is finally away from his relatives but it appears that he is psychologically damaged from their care and will need time and help to get over that.

    I wonder how Draco will behave, since he never met Harry, and Harry did not have an opportunity to turn down his friendship. Maybe the house rivalries will be less serious in this timeline.

    I really liked this chapter and am glad that Harry and Snape are getting to know each other. Thanks for writing and sharing it!

    Author's Response: Thank you for catching that copy paste mistake! Fixing now :) I'm glad you're enjoying! I think you'll enjoy what's in store for Harry!
Title: Beginning to heal 25 Feb 2023 8:22 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for the update. This was a sweet chapter. I especially enjoyed the conversation between Harry and Snape at the end.
Title: Beginning to heal 25 Feb 2023 11:16 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    A sweet fuzzy chapter thank you. I think the hat has made a mistake I can’t believe that the Harry you have in this universe is suited to Gryffindor house but I’m sure you will make sure he is ok. In cannon Harry has money for school is this part of the story that he doesn’t have any?
    Thank you again for your excellent story

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