This is so good! More please!
Lovely start to the story, thank you for sharing it
The prophecy was set in a physical stone. Crystal is a type of stone, and that stone contained the prophecy.
Author's Response: I didn't mean it literally, more that even though there is a prophecy it doesn't dictate the future. That his future is his to make :)
Great start. Can’t wait for more!
Thanks so much for posting your story! I’m so happy to learn that the rest is already written. I wonder if it was Lily who blew the pages of the book open and, if so, how she did that. It was a nice detail to add Snape’s discomfort with touch. I like how he is retaining his strict outward facade, while being gentle and comforting with Harry. I’m looking forward to the chapters ahead.
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