| Title: The Difference
| 21 Jun 2023 10:45 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very interesting the contrast between the boys, thank you
Author's Response: Thanks!:-)
| Title: The Mirror
| 21 Jun 2023 10:30 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a most intriguing start
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! :-)
I really enjoyed this.
Author's Response: I'm pleased to learn that. Thanks for letting me know! :-)
I loved this story! The universe you’ve created has totally drawn me in. Your characterizations were really compelling. The Alium was also such a cool concept. Any hints on the name of the site where more chapters are posted? I couldn’t readily find it, and I’m hooked on your story! Thanks so much for letting us know there’s a sequel in the works that’s more standard Severitus! I look forward to reading more of your story anon.
Author's Response: Thank you, you've been very generous with your praise and it made me smile so much!
I'm surprised you couldn't find it; it pops right up for me if I Google the words Alium and Severitus. Fair warning, the stuff on here is a little more polished than the ones on there; I tend to edit slightly before I copy stuff across to here.
That was great! I am excited to hear there will be a sequel, though the prospect of having to be patient is rather daunting...
Thank you!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I might get the sequel finished over the summer, perhaps. Life is less busy then.
I wonder what both Harrys are thinking as they watch the two Snapes talk. I liked how Alium Snape used legilimancy to convince his alternate.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad it worked well.
This was magnificent. It drew me in intensely and wouldn’t let me to go until the end. I love the utterly Snape way in which he confronted himself - it’s one of the best discussions between his two selves that I’ve ever read. Thanks so much for updating! I’m waiting on tenterhooks for the next installment.
Author's Response: This review made me smile, thank you. It was very sweet of you to say, and I'm glad the characterisation seems to be at least somewhat on point. It does rather beg the question though; how many conversations between multiple Snape's have you read?! XD
Author's Response: This review made me smile, thank you. It was very sweet of you to say, and I'm glad the characterisation seems to be at least somewhat on point. It does rather beg the question though; how many conversations between multiple Snapes have you read?! XD
Author's Response: This review made me smile, thank you. It was very sweet of you to say, and I'm glad the characterisation seems to be at least somewhat on point. It does rather beg the question though; how many conversations between multiple Snapes have you read?! XD
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks!
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