Fascinating chapter. I love the differences between the two realities and how they’ve affected the characters.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! It's nice to hear that it's working thus far.
I’m grinning at the prospect of what Alium Snape might have to say to his counterpart. I also loved seeing the juxtaposition of their respective selves’ interactions with each other. I can’t wait for the next chapter of your fantastic story!
Author's Response: You're too kind! Thank you! Hopefully you like the next bit as much as this bit.
The details, the set up, this is all so awesome! I’m on tenterhooks!
Wow, this dialogue was so perfectly angsty and compassionate. I loved your explanation of why it had to be Snape. This is amazing!
This is such a wonderful, engaging, and well-written story. I wonder how all of Harry’s new knowledge will change events in his world. I hope we get to find out, as I’m hooked!
Oooooo, this continues to be intriguing and exiting! Can't wait for next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! I could post the rest of it now. But I worry the story will get lost if I do, so I'll probably leave it until tomorrow at least.
Thanks for continuing to review!
Nicely written panic on the part of the Order when they can't get to Harry.
Author's Response: Thanks! It was fun to write.
That was a totally fascinating start to your story, with an utterly gripping chapter end! Thanks so much for sharing.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I like how Harry is learning about his alternate history. I hope we get to see the reaction in the meeting as the doe bounds in.
Author's Response: I've popped the next chapter up so you can see if you like.
Thanks for commenting. I'm glad you like it!
Great conversation between the two Harrys.
Author's Response: Thanks! That's nice to hear, particularly as it is one of my least favourite chapters.
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