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Title: Adder's Fork and Blind Worm's Sting 14 Feb 2024 6:48 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I can’t imagine those two failed. I think you’re tricking us into thinking they did! This is tense and scary not knowing who’s out there and who it was with the fancy boot. Thanks for updating!
Title: Eye of Newt and Toe of Frog 13 Feb 2024 9:28 pm
Reviewer: hobesan (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry thinking he must look different now cracked me up.
    And him thinking to himself that getting shagged made for a pretty good holiday was also pretty funny.

    Author's Response:

    I'm relieved the v-card punch section is playing out okay. I still think of this as YA -ish and have anxiety about these sections as a result. So thanks for the reaction on that!

Title: Round about the Cauldron Go 13 Feb 2024 9:25 pm
Reviewer: hobesan (Signed) [Report This]
    Well Tonks was pretty smooth there , seducing our boy.

    Author's Response:

    Me: My MC needs to lose his v-card.

    Also Me: Oh, look there's a canon character the MC likes a bit whose name is Nymphadora...

Title: Old Wounds 13 Feb 2024 9:23 pm
Reviewer: hobesan (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry smoothing his hair back was a little homage to James , no?
Title: Applying Oneself 13 Feb 2024 9:21 pm
Reviewer: hobesan (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape is being such a good Dad.

    Author's Response:

    Doing things he doesn't want to do as long as he gets a chance to complain about it is Snape's modus operandi. That's pretty much healthy dad mode, right?

    It is a nice scene because they are both comfortable with each other, at least in regards to the topic.

Title: Bewitched, Bothered, and Bewildered 13 Feb 2024 9:15 pm
Reviewer: hobesan (Signed) [Report This]
    Coming back a few chapters to review.
    Harry is oh so normal here, and it so sweet and funny. And Severus is so himself.

    Author's Response:

    All teens go through this, but with poor Harry all these moments are teen^3. 

Title: Wool of Bat and Tongue of Dog 13 Feb 2024 5:20 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Terrific chapter. Hermione chewing o.n Harry’s shoe was hilarious. The wombat is adorable and I loved the pencil drawing. Thanks for updating! I hope Malfoy isn’t being aggressive, by the way. If he is, he needs to go down hard.
Title: Eye of Newt and Toe of Frog 12 Feb 2024 8:25 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I continue to enjoy the pencil drawings at the start of each chapter. Thanks so much for those. I liked Elizabeth until we actually got to know her better. Thanks for updating.

    Author's Response:

    LOL yes, Elizabeth was a writing experiement that went awry, but I left it in, running awry because I was kind of fascinated with what was happening and wanted to see how it would turn out at the weird meta level I was looking at it from. One of those "the characters took over and the author could no longer control things" issues. I can explain later in a note or comment when it's not a spoiler. 

    I was wrong on my last reply. I got confused with the other spot I'm editing and posting from. Harry's 17 in this story right now. 16 is age of consent in UK with no age gap provisions that I can tell. Not that that makes it not subject to some serious scrutiny for damage to the younger party. And fingerwaving at the older person.

    Harry's fascination with Tonks is in part a fascination with the idea of her life that Harry wants to have himself. Maybe less so a fascination with her, exactly. The kind of thing someone might outgrow, eventually. If it doesn't develop more as a proper relationship with the person in front of you rather than the ideal.

Title: Round about the Cauldron Go 09 Feb 2024 7:37 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Ok wait a minute, is Harry a minor and how old is Tonks anyway? I like how Harry disposed of that puffed up popinjay.

    Author's Response:

    Harry's not a minor by UK standards.  It's 1999 so Harry's going on 19 right now in story time, so 18 since it's pre-July.  I think Rowling made this really easy for herself. Harry was born in 1980, so the math is super easy to do on his age. AND on what year he is at Hogwarts, since year one starts 1991. 

    I assumed Tonks was mid 20s when I wrote this. 

     

Title: Old Wounds 08 Feb 2024 12:45 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope they bust out with their animagi skills during their Transfiguration Newt! Thanks for the fun chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Extra credit is extra credit.


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