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Reviews For Resonance
Title: Rendezvous 15 Jan 2024 8:01 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I don’t like how Candide is jerking Snape around. I’m not a big fan, but hopefully she’ll grow on me. I like the way you’ve captured Harry’s range of emotions about it. The duel was fun! Thanks for updating.

    Author's Response:

    I try to give all the characters a fair shake at presenting themselves as well rounded. At this point in the story Snape apparently likes her enough to keep trying. And she's a bit too swayed by others' opinions instead of making her own decisions. But that's a pretty common failing, so I hope not unforgiveable. 

Title: A Time to Reap & Getting Detention 13 Jan 2024 8:45 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]

    Thank you for both chapters. I love the second one they needed to get past all their insecurities. 



    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I sort of wish the whole longer story had more the style of 23 and a half, but it is what it is. 

     

Title: A Time to Reap & Getting Detention 09 Jan 2024 9:02 pm
Reviewer: hobesan (Signed) [Report This]
    I was so happy for this update.
    Lots of Minerva's snappy goodness.
    Neville coming into his own, publicly telling Ron off.
    Senate's arm around sleeping, barefoot Harry was such a sweet moment.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, that is a sweet moment.

    Long ago there was a prolific LJ account with mostly HP pencil drawings and thousands of followers and such amazing art. And an image showed up on their account that matched this scene. But the artist had a note about please not downloading the art. So I honored that. But the account vanished and I really wished I had a copy just for me that I just never shared around, mostly honoring the artist... SIGH.

Title: A Time to Reap & Getting Detention 07 Jan 2024 5:23 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely and sad chapters. Dumbledore’s passing is always a heavy event. I love the way you’ve written Neville standing up so vocally for Harry. I’m glad that Severus is taking his role as a father seriously in trying to bridge the distance. Thanks for the double chapter!

    Author's Response:

    His death is still hard! It's about as peaceful as it could possibly be. I wrote it, but I have no idea what's going on there. Thanks for continuing the great comments, btw.

Title: Painful Truth 28 Dec 2023 9:30 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]

    Thank you, Ron can be nasty when riled I hope Hermione can sort it out

Title: Potions with a Capital "P" 28 Dec 2023 9:12 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]

    Fantastic chapter thank you

Title: Painful Truth 24 Dec 2023 8:35 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Ron really is shallow and cruel. Worse yet, he keeps repeating his mistakes time and again, never really learning. Thanks for updating.
Title: Potions with a Capital "P" 23 Dec 2023 5:33 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    That Greer is really getting me down. I enjoyed the scene in Dumbledore’s office. So glad that Severus knows that Greer is on the war path. Thanks for the update!

    Author's Response:

    Severus is used to rivalries and infighting, fortunately.

Title: Settling In 23 Dec 2023 12:52 am
Reviewer: hobesan (Signed) [Report This]
    "You had to have a full set,didn't you, Harry?"
    One of my many favorite quotes in this story.

    Author's Response:

    One day while writing early on when I was like, oh most of year six has already happened, and there must have been a DADA teacher in there... And, of course that throw-away character had to try and kill Harry. Or course.

Title: Settling In 22 Dec 2023 9:54 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]

    Oh dear I think Hermione has dropped Harry into trouble. Thank you a great chapter


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