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Reviews For Resonance
Author's Response: Thanks for reading yet again! Nice to have company with this little obsession.
Just a question - wouldn't the toilets be inside the tower? Author's Response: That's a good question. Back in 2005 one couldn't just ask AI powered google such things. So, my over-read about medieval castles brain was thinking that originally Hogwarts would have had an overhanging outdoor affair, at best, and most everyone would have used chamber pots emptied by the maid. So bathrooms would have been added much later as an afterthought, and since any bathroom would have been a wild luxury at that time, given the alternative was an outhouse or a chamber pot, having them anywhere inside would have been amazing. So they would have been positioned where the effluence could be easily piped to the moat (in this case, the lake). So, I was thinking, not in the common area of the house. Same problem by the way for the dungeons. Below lake level, no way to get the waste to flow to the lake, so those common rooms wouldn't either. I mean, other than magic. ;-) But architecturally, the castle seems like an ordinary castle. I'm sure I overthought it. But that was the thinking.
Not sure Severus sold the idea in the right way but definitely in a Severus way. I have so enjoyed reading through this story so far thank you so much Author's Response: The feedback is welcome here. this section got rewritten to reflect more what I expected was going in in Snape's head. So, I wasn't sure how it was going to read.
I feel I want to shake the teachers. Thank you
Thank you, Severus and Dumbledore's conversation was very good. Author's Response: It got a lot better on revision and I didn't even have to make it much longer. I didn't previously take into account what is almost a bound house-elf relationship Snape had with Dumbledore all those years. And like a house-elf, Snape doesn't know what to do with the idea of freedom from that, so he hasn't really thought about it. Here comes this crezy request and now all of those issues come to the fore, and he has to not only deal with this new idea, he has to decide where he stands, which is probably harder.
Poor Harry, he got what he wanted and it wasn't what he wanted. Author's Response: Nicely stated. That is definitely the theme at this point in the story.
Very intense and scary, thank you. I wonder who did win the match Author's Response: Draco grabbed the snitch when Harry turned away. So Slytherin-Ravenclaw won.
Poor Harry, from one cauldron of trouble to another. Thank you a great chapter Author's Response: Yeah, that's kinda rarely going to let up. Poor Harry indeed.
Very sweet and typically IC for the three. Thank you for the update
Very good chapter thank you, I rather like to have Fudge still bumbling around |
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