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Reviews For Revenge for Christmas
Awwwww, this was so beautiful. I loved it. Sirius being so broken and struggling mentally was so realistic. I loved how supportive and protective Remus was. And Snape. He was so fierce, and eventually so vulnerable, but so in character. What a fantastic story. I enjoyed it so much. Well done. Thank you so much for writing it and sharing it!
Wow, fantastic! Great chapter, so much emotion and action, it read like an action drama movie. Poor Harry though. Still feeling rejected. He is clearly depressed. i'm glad that Snape suggested a check up for Harry. He cares.
I LOVE your Snape. I loved your descriptions of how he made the pendant, how you describe his affect. It is so nice that he is telling Harry about Lily. And noticing that Harry needs new glasses. I find him to be very much in character. Poor Harry though. He is just a mess with his friends, and with being alone for Christmas. Dumbledore should of let him go or allow Molly to bring Christmas to Hogwarts. I bet Snape is going to be alone for Christmas too. Great chapter. I really enjoyed it. Thank you for writing and sharing it1
Thank you so much for your well written and wonderful story, I loved the ending so much
I loved how Harry reacted to Sirius. He needed to let all the aggression out. Thank you for a great chapter
Love their interaction really well thought out and written thank you. Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked their interactions.
Excellent start thank you, the thought of Severus chortling is really scary! Author's Response: It was about the scariest thing I think he could have done! Thank you for the review!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and compliment! I'm currently focusing back in on my original fiction, but you never know when a plot bunny won't leave me alone. Something always being me back to Harry Potter fanfiction. :) |
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