| Title: Breakdown
| 13 Apr 2005 3:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Remara (Anonymous)
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This is without a doubt one of the most beautifull stories I have ever read. everyone's and especially Harry's emotions are described so clearly. This is truly magnificent work, please continue.
| Title: Away
| 13 Apr 2005 10:52 am
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| Reviewer: Ashley (Anonymous)
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This is a great story...i see you havn't updated in awhile, and as soon as i fiinish, i'll be anxiously awaiting the time at which you do. Harry's new powers are really intriguing, and i can't wait to see where they take him.
| Title: Breakdown
| 05 Apr 2005 6:38 am
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| Reviewer: Belonging Curious (Anonymous)
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HURRY UP AND UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I still haven't received my payment for the hours that I've put in on this fic. Until I do, I think I'll update when I have time, thanks.
| Title: Breakdown
| 29 Mar 2005 11:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Iniysa (Anonymous)
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So good to read from you again! Great chapter. I hope to read the next chapter soon! :)
Lauren
fantastic. this story is absolutely fantastic. i love it! its one of the best ive ever read. please PLEASE update soon!!
| Title: Breakdown
| 26 Mar 2005 9:51 am
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| Reviewer: EJC (Anonymous)
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this is really good. I wish the adults would start understanding harry...
Keep up the good work.
| Title: Breakdown
| 25 Mar 2005 2:26 am
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| Reviewer: Amaris (Anonymous)
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I love it! Harry is a nice blend of insecurity and confidence; of fear and recklessness. Update soon!
| Title: Breakdown
| 22 Mar 2005 12:49 am
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| Reviewer: Meggplant (Anonymous)
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OHMYGOD! you updated! you have made me deliriously happy - i've been waiting for a new chapter for soooooo long! and we finally, FINALLY, are seeing someone get to the bottom of the trauma in Harry's life. finally, someone has seen the abuse inflicted on him by that Woman. finally, someone is hearing Harry talk about his experiences at the Dursley's. and hopefully the comments that have been made about him being so thin will also be addressed. i can't wait for the next chapter, in which i hope you will continue to illuminate for the other 'adults' in the house exactly what they have done by inflicting these situations on the poor boy. i just want to gather him into a hug, take him away from everyone except Gordon, and make sure they all know how much they have failed him as his guardians and caregivers. god. it really is interesting when you think about how many issues the canon Harry Potter must have. i hope JKR allows him to let loose some of his emotions in the next few books... it would not be good to have the same Harry who was so angry in the fifth book be the one who vanquishes the Dark Lord. frankly i could see him becoming a threat himself, given that his treatment has been so poor...
gah. i'm rambling. thank you so much for the story, i love it! i can't wait for more, and i hope you're still writing your other ones too...
xoxox
| Title: Breakdown
| 20 Mar 2005 3:25 am
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| Reviewer: Lady Rosebit (Anonymous)
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Yeah! you finally updated! now update again!
Author's Response: Don't I wish. Unfortunately, this is not my job, and the work I'm getting paid for gets priority. Trust me, though, if I could write Lies as part of my job, that would be great! ;-)
| Title: Breakdown
| 03 Mar 2005 6:15 pm
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| Reviewer: CJ (Anonymous)
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Awsome! I love how you write the scenes between Harry and Gordon. I can't wait to read more!
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