Title: Chapter 19 - Discoveries (Part 1)
| 23 Mar 2025 10:26 pm
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Reviewer: Aline_B (Signed)
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I loved reading it! We know Snape is the father, but does Snape know she's Lily? When did he find out? Isn't that quite wrong to continue in it's own (given she didn't know?)? (Also romantic because they'd fall in love not knowing eachother).
Slightest chritism, it's lovley but the logic of "hey let's talk" and becoming friends like that feels like girl-logic. Afaik boys do it a bit diffrently. But it's still a very lovley story.
Also I made this account to be able to tell you that reading the story was quite nice