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Title: Such Small Words But They Hit So Huge 08 Mar 2025 11:03 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]

    Lovely, gentle encounter thank you



    Author's Response:

    Thank you!!

     

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Title: Such Small Words But They Hit So Huge 03 Mar 2025 5:06 am
Reviewer: randomausfulloffluff (Signed) [Report This]
    oh my goodness, that is absolutely lovely. Quite good for your first fic! You capture the setting very well, and i think your charaterisations are spot on. Thank you:))

    Author's Response:

    Ahhhhh, thank you so much!!! I was so worried about writing Snape especially, so this means the world to me!

    <3 <3 <3

Title: Such Small Words But They Hit So Huge 03 Mar 2025 3:59 am
Reviewer: Reticulated (Signed) [Report This]
    Your story has a very calm atmosphere to it. I like a lot of your lines and the addition of parenthesis. Nitpick - there were a few lines that could've used an edit/reformat. Also, 10 years? That's a long time.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! I appreciate the critique, I'll look over it again eventually. And ten years is a long time, I know, I just feel like both of them really needed time to heal, and I wanted it to make more sense that Snape was so drastically changed.

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