Title: Sectumsempra - The Consequences
| 24 Feb 2022 6:39 pm
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Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I enjoyed your ending. It felt like just the right way to end your story.
Title: Sectumsempra - The Consequences
| 24 Feb 2022 6:37 pm
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Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I’m glad that Harry apologized sincerely, and that Severus showed a deeper understanding and in a way compassion.
Title: Sectumsempra - The Consequences
| 24 Feb 2022 6:33 pm
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Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I appreciated their conversation, and especially the seeds of trust that Dumbledore plants.
Title: Sectumsempra - The Consequences
| 24 Feb 2022 6:30 pm
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Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I appreciate Hermione’s resolve in wanting to help Harry beyond what Snape has suggested, He clearly needs it!
Title: Sectumsempra - The Consequences
| 24 Feb 2022 6:26 pm
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Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I was initially thinking veritaserum too! It was nice seeing Harry calm down from his own perspective.
Title: Sectumsempra - The Consequences
| 24 Feb 2022 6:23 pm
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Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Well there’s the silver lining in all this - besides building rapport with Snape, Harry gets to focus on being a better captain. Hey, we’ll take it!
Title: Sectumsempra - The Consequences
| 24 Feb 2022 6:20 pm
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Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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The salve part was funny from Harry’s perspective, though the caning so painful to read about.
Title: Sectumsempra - The Consequences
| 24 Feb 2022 6:19 pm
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Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Nice conversation between Dumbledore and Harry, thank you.
Title: Sectumsempra - The Consequences
| 24 Feb 2022 6:11 pm
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Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Oh no, this is definitely darker from Harry’s perspective. I feel sad for him.
Title: Sectumsempra - The Consequences
| 24 Feb 2022 6:09 pm
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Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Funny author note! Thanks for the nice chapter.
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