| Title: A Shopping We Will Go
| 25 Jan 2020 2:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved the twins and the shopping trip thank you
| Title: Blast From the Past
| 25 Jan 2020 12:12 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Good ending! What indeed!
| Title: Finally Home
| 15 Mar 2013 12:15 am
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| Reviewer: Saravi Boo (Anonymous)
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This would be a ten if not for a few minor continuity errors. It was an excellent read. ^_^
This was cute! :) sequel? xx
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm not sure how I'd do a sequel for this one, but I have several other one-shots on fanfiction.net (seal1 is my name there). I have several others I'd love to write, but I'm now working full time and putting kids through college, so until there's an empty nest, computer time is limited. Thanks again for the review!
Nicely writ! Highly enjoyable from start to finish. Voldemort, defeated by sparkly purple goo. *shakes head, grinning wryly* That's so awesome. :P
Thanks for sharing!
Lovely story! I quite enjoyed it.
I'm a bit confused... about this chapter and the last..... they seem......the same but....different.....
| Title: Finally Home
| 09 Feb 2007 7:48 am
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| Reviewer: magda2em (Anonymous)
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I loved your Severus. Just as I loved your Harry - I think he's a very believable character in your story. I also liked the ending - it was marvellous.. and the sentence "Looking at you, as you truly are, is like seeing her come back to me." is a lovely point to the whole story. What I didn't like - at times the actions of the children were driving me mad, totally mad. But on the whole I liked your story and I hope there's some more stories by you out there, I'll look for them in a sec. *hugs*
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