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Reviews For Evolution
"What good was it to carry a dead man's name...?" As much as I've enjoyed reading this story, I found this sentence extremely disturbing. I mean James Potter DIED saving Harry and this is how he gets treated? With such disrespect? Majority of these kind of stories do James injustice. I don't understand why James has to become a "nobody" is the story portrays Severus as a biological dad. Why is it that it's either Severus or James? And not both deserving the same amount of respect.
LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!!
I totally agree Author, Pettigrew was never a Marauder. Marauders consisted of just 3 people, Prongs, Padfoot and Moony. I think the name "wormtail" is as disgusting as the owner. Absolutely revolting. I love the relationship that Harry has always had with Sirius. I love how you show Harry's carefree self around Sirius and Remus. 💕
YES!!!! They are ALIVE!!!! Please do keep them alive and a part of Harry and Severus's life. Pretty please with cherry 🍒 on top!!!
YES!!!! They are ALIVE!!!! Please do keep them alive and a part of Harry and Severus's life. Pretty please with cherry 🍒 on top!!!
YES!!!! They are ALIVE!!!! Please do keep them alive and a part of Harry and Severus's life. Pretty please with cherry 🍒 on top!!!
YES!!!! They are ALIVE!!!! Please do keep them alive and a part of Harry and Severus's life. Pretty please with cherry 🍒 on top!!!
YES!!!! They are ALIVE!!!! Please do keep them alive and a part of Harry and Severus's life. Pretty please with cherry 🍒 on top!!!
WAIT!! Sirius and Lupin both are dead in this story? Harry feeling a pang in his heart for Remus and Sirius and wonder why he always loses his family... Man I had hoped that Sirius wouldnt die in this story but alas.
The broken mirror... it is the same one Sirius gave him? If it is, it break after Sirius dies at the end of 5th year. Or has Sirius already died in this story? If its not, then i wonder which mirror this is... hmm. No results found.
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