Reviews For Perseverance
Author's Response: Thank you. I hope to be able to update soon but real life is really getting in the way. I hope to update soon. Thanks for the review.
So, dear cara-tanaka, you are really an awesome writer. Maybe a slow one (well, I suppose we all prefer reading than writing in a longer perspective), but really, really good. I loved the scene, when Snape got to know about Harry's migraine and how he treated it. Also, I am very interested in how Harry will exploit his interest in Art, since it seems to be really calming for him!
I hope your RL issues will disappear and you will be able to provide us with another awesome chapter soon! :)
Author's Response: Oh my goodness, thank you so much Victoire. Your review made my day. :D I'm so glad you like it and that you think I'm a good writer. This is my first story so I've very happy with the response and more than pleased and flattered you think so highly of my writing. It's alright. It happens, so I can understand wanting to read more than write. I'm glad you liked the chapter. I have five pages of the next chapter written so far so I'm going to try and work on that more tomorrow, so we'll see how far I get though I do hope I won't take so long posting again. I'm slow in writing because I want that when I write, for the characters actions and dialogue to feel natural and not forced or rushed so it takes time for me to iron it out to satisfaction. Thank you so much again and I hope to have more for you soon and that I see you around when the next chapter comes out :D Thanks again :D
Author's Response: Thanks flyingchrissy. I hope I'll be able to update soon, I'm working on it so please be a little more patient. Thanks for the review :D
Author's Response: I will be working on this, don't worry it's not abandoned. I actually have written half of the next chapter it's simply taking longer than I anticipated and I had a few other personal issues. I will be posting the next chapter as soon as I can but it might take a while. Thank you so much for your lovely review. I'm glad you like it.
Thanks to coincidence I've found and read your story.
I enjoy your stile very much, there's a slow pace to it that I like and it's easy to imagine the quiet atmosphere between the two wizards.
You describe the interaction and the surroundings beautifully and I'm looking forward to reading more of you in the future.
What I particularly liked was your take on Harry, who took his time to think despite the horrible events at the end of his fourth year.
I always had this feeling that JKR kind of jumped between the way book 4 ended and book 5 started ignoring certain things she wrote down herself, such as Harry being a witness of Snape standing up for him by showing the Dark Mark to the Minister of Magic and his knowledge of Snape being a spy. By the end of GoF I had the impression that there was a consensus or at least, some understanding on Harry's part, which was deemed null and void in Book 5... I'm glad you took a different take on this.
Okay, that was a very long review to simply say: I love this story and I'm looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response: LOL. Dear Melethril
Thank you so much for your lovely words and encouragement. I'm very glad that you like it. I completely agree with your sentiments. I'm gald you like my take on it. I am working on the 6th chapter though at the moment, I'm having a hard time finding time to write though I am working on it. Hopefully, I'll have the next chapter up soon and you can tell me what you think and I hope you like it. Thank you so much for your words and encouragement. They make my day. I hope to see you around when the next chapter comes out. Cheers. :D
Author's Response: Oh WOW! Thank you so much. I'm so glad you like it. Thanks for the lovely review. Hope to see you when I next update. :D
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