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Reviews For A Life Unsettled
Title: Draco 05 Feb 2011 1:59 am
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter. The bonding with Draco was awesome and the ending was really cute.
Title: Old Wounds 05 Feb 2011 12:39 am
Reviewer: Bratling (Signed) [Report This]
    just a queick question--what about Voldemort? Is he gone in this one?

    Author's Response: Yeah, it said that at the start of the story and in an authors note.
Title: Depressed 04 Feb 2011 11:57 pm
Reviewer: firefly5151 (Signed) [Report This]
    Love this. Can't wait for an update.
Title: Common Place 04 Feb 2011 11:19 pm
Reviewer: firefly5151 (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry. Snape sure is mistreating him.
Title: Depressed 04 Feb 2011 11:02 pm
Reviewer: LucySnapeDaughter-Of-Snape (Signed) [Report This]
    its really good
    cant wait to see some more interaction between harry and severus
    i love the realationship that you have going on with harry and draco too :D
Title: Immune 04 Feb 2011 9:00 pm
Reviewer: SpicyKittins (Signed) [Report This]
    I can't wait for more!!!
Title: Isolated 04 Feb 2011 3:46 pm
Reviewer: lex (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm not sure I get whey Ron is so mad at Harry, or why Lucius is being nice given his historical dislike of Harry.

    Maybe some background on Malfoy and his motives (good or bad) would clarify this? Alternate characterizations are enjoyable (I like Lucius as a secret good guy), but to pull them off effectively, it's helpful to give the reader a reason to move beyond the original characterizations as developed by JKR.

    Hope that makes sense - and it's just con crit. Nothing bad. :)
Title: Common Place 04 Feb 2011 3:34 pm
Reviewer: lex (Anonymous) [Report This]
    chuckle - I can just imagine Snape's face.

    Harry seems to be taking this well. I wonder where Dumbledore is in all of this. Is he not aware of the development, or is he just staying silent?
Title: Inside Out 04 Feb 2011 12:34 pm
Reviewer: Moon_Willow (Signed) [Report This]
    Whew. What a ride. I was on the verge of tears. Finally he came. Fantastic as ever. I'm in awe. You've outdone yourself.
Title: Grasping at Straws 04 Feb 2011 12:19 pm
Reviewer: Moon_Willow (Signed) [Report This]
    My heart is aching along with Harry's. How do you do this?? I mean, make the reader hold their breath along with the character. Or maybe i'm just being too emotional? Severus has to care, doesn't he?

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