|Title: Chapter 44
|14 Nov 2021 11:09 pm
|Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
So they're going to hook him up to a machine in a muggle hospital that will give him continuous electricity? If I'm understanding I mean. That'll certainly put remus and Elias on the magical map for their research if it works! I can't figure Dumbledore or voldemort being dumb or oblivious enough to not work this out now -- super magic kid somehow knows a snake is in the ministry and is able to apparate in and kill it in time to save the father of harry potters best friend? Yeah the secrets toast. Can't wait to see the chaos keep unraveling! Awesome chapter
I can't say much. there is too much to unpack! I just am hopeful the next part is coming soon.
Thank you, thank you, thank you! Very much obliged for you to continuing this.
|Title: Chapter 43
|17 Oct 2021 3:46 pm
|Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
Oh dear me, it's all over. There's no possible way to explain Elias being there or having the vision or knowing thr snake was there without Dumbledore finding out that he is harry potter. And since voldemort was likely watching through naginis eyes, he probably has a good look at Elias. He might not know who he is just yet but he'll know the boy is a threat and he might be too insane to put it together (hopefully) but one of his death eaters like Lucius isn't. Oh man when you say chaos you really *mean* it. I wanna be angry at frank for encouraging something that reckless. And I wanna be mad at Elias for putting himself (not to mention snape) in this position with no good possible outcomes. But that's who he's always been anyway isn't it? And I'm just too plum happy that frank and Alice really aren't as far gone as the healers think -- they are more aware and capable than they've let on and I think they're going to be a big help in severus figuring out how to help Harry's shervil condition. After all, they're in there because of the cruciatus too right. Anyway, great chapter. I for one couldn't stop reading
Author's Response: Yeah, there's going to be a lot of fall out from this one, but we'll deal with that when we come to it. As is, we just need to keep him alive. I told you it's going to be chaos! Yeah, Frank and Alice aren't totally there, but they're not totally gone either. And yes, they're in St. Mungo's because of the Cruciatus curse canonically. Fun fact, this fic was originally going to be a 'lets cure them!' fic, but that went off the rails a while back (partially because I let the ethics of what I was planning to do to Frank and Alice get in the way). There is a secondary plan, but its much less Longbottom-centric.
I love this story, and can't wait for more! I just read all 43 chapters and had trouble putting it down.
Author's Response: I'm so sorry it's taking me so long to put out the next chapter! I'm glad you enjoyed it thus far though!
|Title: Chapter 43
|14 Oct 2021 2:13 am
|Reviewer: Abie (Signed)
I found this story a couple of days ago and I am absolutely hooked. It's got such a unique premise, and your writing style is really engaging. Can't wait to see where it goes!
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it thus far!
Wow. What a chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed!
OMG, I can't believe he took nearly a full vial of that stuff - undiluted!
Poor guy now has burns all over him from wards and I imagine the death of a magic snake while you are holding it, as well as the sudden released of all that energy - is going to suck!
Its interesting, looks like Crucio's action of igniting every nerve seems to overload people that have it on them too long. Frank and Alice seem to know more than they should, they just can't do anything about it.
Author's Response: Yeah, my thoughts on them is that everything they do is a lateral thinking puzzle. Even in the book, Alice giving Neville the gum wrappers I saw as such a sweet gesture if you think of it in kind of a sideways fashion. She was giving him a wrapped present (a literal wrapper) that contained something she enjoyed (the gum) and she wanted him to enjoy it as well (which is why she mad a point of handing it to him and not his grandmother). I think they truly do understand more of what is going on around them than they're able to let on canonically and in this fic.
oh dear you didn't kill Harry, surely?
Author's Response: He's not dead until I say he's dead.
Author's Response: Yup! Wouldn't be the chaos arch without a bunch of cliffy's!