Title: CH 17: Falling Skies
| 17 Feb 2023 4:50 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Poor Harry, I can see why Severus is doing this but it is so hard on Harry. Thank you a great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Things are getting far more challenging!
Title: CH 16: A Call to Arms
| 17 Feb 2023 2:45 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good description of the Griffindors in action. Thank you
Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: CH 15: The Way Forward
| 17 Feb 2023 9:55 am
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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A lovely healing chapter thank you
Author's Response: You are very welcome <3
Title: CH 14: Into the Depths
| 17 Feb 2023 9:34 am
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I like a Severus POV chapter as it brings a good balance to the story. Interesting that Narcissa was wearing muggle dress I would think she would always be in robes. Thank you this story is so gripping
Author's Response: I loooove Severus POVs! There is always that honest, brutal truth to them and a darkness that a Harry POV doesn't quite have. You'll definitely get more Severus-chapters this story.
Title: CH 13: Fade In
| 16 Feb 2023 10:40 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great fun for most of the chapter thank you. Hermione is lovely and so patient.
Author's Response: She really is <3
Title: CH 12: With Asphodel
| 16 Feb 2023 9:47 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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What a wonderful finding in the library thank you
Author's Response: I've always wanted to add it in, and since Severus has difficultly admitting anything of the sort, giving Harry the breadcrumb to find it, is more his style.
Title: CH 11: Rise Up
| 16 Feb 2023 9:29 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved the old D.A. meeting but so sad, thank you
Author's Response: Yeah, I knew it was going to be a very sad and solemn one.
Title: CH 10: Back Within the Shadows
| 16 Feb 2023 9:09 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Interesting insight into Malfoy manor thank you
Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: CH 9: Into the Forest Again
| 16 Feb 2023 8:51 pm
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Great chapter I loved the two Patronus working together thank you
Author's Response: If only it happened in canon 3
Title: CH 8: The Slow Ascent
| 16 Feb 2023 8:35 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter thank you
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading!
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