| Title: CH 28: A Rocky Pursuit
| 24 Feb 2023 5:44 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for a great chapter. It must be difficult to write an action chapter as there are so many people to control and the action itself. Well done it was clear, exciting and well written
Author's Response: It took a LOT of planning for it to all come together. Keeping track of where everyone else was, and what they were doing, was challenging!
Whew! That was intense...
Author's Response: It's a little nuts! hehe!
Nicely written skirmish.
Author's Response: Skirmish! Hehe, I love that! And thank you - it was fun, and a bit of a nightmare to plan.
| Title: CH 27: Raise the Banner
| 20 Feb 2023 3:12 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I meant to ask in my last review, what of Draco? He must be worried about Severus.
Author's Response: There will be more Draco very soon =)
| Title: CH 27: Raise the Banner
| 20 Feb 2023 3:11 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I loved his class, he is a born teacher even though he hated it. Thank you
Author's Response: We were robbed of seeing more of his DADA classes in HBP! He's a great Potions teacher, but he would have been such a great dueling teacher!
| Title: CH 26: The Misty Dell
| 20 Feb 2023 2:41 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very sad in the woods but so well written thank you
Author's Response: Aww, thank you. It was fun writing such a dark, almost creepy chapter.
| Title: CH 25: Melancholy Reminisce
| 20 Feb 2023 12:34 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very spooky atmosphere at the end. I think cleaning Sirius’ room gave Harry not only a distraction but perhaps some closure. Thank you
Author's Response: I completely agree <3
| Title: CH 24: The Lunar Dilemma
| 18 Feb 2023 6:04 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank a wonderful scene in the lab.
Author's Response: One of my early favourites <3
| Title: CH 23: Shards of Glass
| 18 Feb 2023 5:40 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Good old Hermione one step ahead. Well back to classroom for the students! Thank you
Author's Response: You are very welcome! =)
| Title: CH 22: Exit Wounds
| 17 Feb 2023 7:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Brilliant action chapter thank you. The juxtaposition of that and the last haunting scene was a real jolt and pure theatre. Thank you
Author's Response: Thank you <3 Severus has a lot to overcome.
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