| Title: Chapter 13
| 01 Dec 2007 10:02 pm
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| Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous)
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Firstly, sorry to hear about your difficulties. I hope all goes well with your job search.
I loved the chapter, of course. It was well-written and I like seeing how far Harry is coming in his trust of Severus. It is very touching.
Awww! So adorable, and absolutely horrific. I hate your Aunt Petunia. I hated her in canon, but my hate for yours is so much more elevated. What a horrible person.
I'm glad to see that Severus took Mrs. Weasley's advice about asking Harry to tell him about his nightmare. Perhaps he'll be able to help him all that he needs.
Can't wait for more :D
| Title: Chapter 13
| 01 Dec 2007 7:38 am
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| Reviewer: Eva (Signed)
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Oh, I hope everything is alright within days.*nods* And as for the chapter, do I need to say anything at all? It was wonderful and I loved it. It's not a newsflash that I love reading your stories.
OMG!! I'm so sorry your RL has become so difficult - I will send 'good job' vibes your way, and 'good health' vibes as well!!
I'm so glad Harry was able to talk to Severus about the abuse he received at the Dursleys, maybe it will help to unburden his poor little heart some!! I was also extremely pleased that Harry finally had a 'smooth' day with the Weasleys!! Molly is so good with Harry, I just love her in this story, and she just annoys me in canon, so kudos to you!!
I look forward to more, but I understand that you obviously have other priorities at the moment, so I'll just wish you the best of luck and hope we hear from you soon!!
Scarlett
Excellent chapter! I am really glad Harry was able to open up and speak to Severus about his dream. Sorry to hear you lost your job and I wish you luck in finding a new one!
A lovely chapter. Oh, how I've missed this story :) Good luck with the job-search! Perhaps a career in writing?...
Oh, it sounds like you're having a rough time. I'm so sorry, and hope things will be looking up soon! I eagerly look forward to your updates, but of course, you do have to eat, so I'll try to be patient, lol.
Good chapter! Once again, I was just furious with the Dursleys--such evil people. But Harry does seem to be making a little progress, slowly but surely. He does seem to be trusting Severus a little more, and it will be good for him to open up. I just hope he can come to believe what Severus is telling him--that he is a good person, and that no one should be treated the way he was with the Dursleys.
I'll be looking forward to more, when you can write it!
| Title: Chapter 13
| 01 Dec 2007 12:21 am
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| Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous)
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Why not go on vacation out of the country and take Harry to a mind healer? Abuse can have life long problems associated with it and they are fobbing it off on amateur efforts as if it was meaningless because it isn't physical. Seems to me Sev, Molly, and Albus are cheating Harry of his health care because of fear of the ministry even though Snape is his father. Yes, getting Harry to trust his father is important, and important to the story, but this kid is seriously traumatized (he has flashback episodes for gods sakes) and they are adding to his torture by not understanding him and exposing him to an environment that is not helping. Get the kid some professional help by hook or by crook.
| Title: Chapter 12
| 26 Nov 2007 10:54 pm
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| Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous)
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With each new chapter, I love Harry and Severus a whole lot more. I just can't get enough of this story. I'm really enjoying all the Molly moments too. Great work on this chappy. Can't wait for more....soon, please. :)
| Title: Chapter 4
| 23 Nov 2007 6:56 pm
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| Reviewer: Artemis (Anonymous)
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Poor Harry! I wonder what he's hurt now?! Great chapter. I love the very *real* interaction with Charlie, as seen through Harry's eyes. "Tree" is a great addition to the story; and I always love Parseltongue bits in the fic!
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