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Title: Chapter 10 04 Nov 2007 10:48 pm
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Why are their no mind healers in the wizarding world to help poor Harry. As for his identity, they could put him under a glamour or get a binding vow from the healer first. Mrs. Weasley doesn't seem to know what she's doing for all the advice she gave Sev, especially as more than half her attention is on her own kids. Why doesn't Sev hire his own sitter just for Harry?
Title: Chapter 10 04 Nov 2007 6:55 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry, he's still got a lot of healing to do. I'm so glad that Severus is able to be supportive and give Harry what he needs, even if he has to venture out of his own comfort zone to do so.

    I'm really curious to see how Molly and the Weasley kids will react to Harry's running off, and earlier how he protected his food from everyone.

    The Weasleys kids are really wonderful, but if they don't understand Harry's history, they might be inclined to either laugh, or feel insulted, or just think Harry's plain crazy. I wonder if Molly will explain some of the abuse Harry's suffered to them, so they will understand and be compassionate. Or if she thinks it would be too much of a violation of privacy.

    I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
Title: Chapter 10 03 Nov 2007 9:54 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry's very sweet in this chapter. I liked Molly, too. I like how you have her treating the kids. It's very Molly like. Good chapter!
Title: Chapter 10 03 Nov 2007 6:39 am
Reviewer: footontheground (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay new chapter! I love the Weasley's and Snape in this.
Title: Chapter 10 03 Nov 2007 3:49 am
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahh! No! *Shakes head* I'm terribly reminded of A Child Called It, which made me cry... Ugh, poor Harry. I hate the Dursley's, especially in this one. How horrible.

    I wonder how Mrs. Weasley will deal with this one. I felt so bad for Harry... *I* wouldn't know how to use a quill, and I have a good 13 years on him in this story, lol. She's so patient, though. I love that woman.

    Can't wait for more :D

    Author's Response:

    I'm terribly reminded of A Child Called It, which made me cry...

    Me, too.  And that's where I borrowed the name of the Whelp series from.  Thanks for the review!

Title: Chapter 10 03 Nov 2007 1:35 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! The last part was so unexpected and gave me chills.
Title: Chapter 10 03 Nov 2007 12:29 am
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor Harry. Molly makes a wonderful mother and she has the patience of a saint dealing with all of her children. Great chapter
Title: Chapter 10 03 Nov 2007 12:16 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry! It will take quite some time before he realizes that it's okay to ask for help. Keep up the awesome writing!
Title: Chapter 10 03 Nov 2007 12:12 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    You. Must. Update. Again! Please? I really love reading the Whelp series, it is very emotional and entertaining to read. It has funny and excieting parts, and I always enjoy reading each chapter. Please, please update another chapter as soon as humanly possible, or I might just die from waiting. Can't wait for the next chapter, and find out what Harry will do!

    P.S. Give Treacle some cat-nip from me, she's so cute! I'm glad Harry has her.

    Beth
Title: Chapter 9 28 Oct 2007 1:20 am
Reviewer: rosemaryeve (Anonymous) [Report This]
    excellent two chapters, I love this story

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