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Title: Chapter 21 05 Aug 2008 5:05 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Too bad Sirius is insane. Then again, what else could he be? Too bad he's scaring the pants off of Harry, too. But you are doing a very credible rendition of a man on the edge trying to survive.
Title: Chapter 21 04 Aug 2008 7:28 pm
Reviewer: NaiveGhost (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for the update.
    Keep writing!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review!

    "Keep writing!"

    I certainly will, till they pry the keyboard from my cold, dead fingers. ;-)

Title: Chapter 21 04 Aug 2008 7:19 pm
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Fantastic chapter with Harry no too scared to protect his pet.

    Author's Response: 'Zactly.  He knows his priorities.  Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 21 04 Aug 2008 7:13 pm
Reviewer: le skrewt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    great chapter!
    now the wrath of snape is coming... i didn't know why you had named the fiction until the last chapter!

    Author's Response: Yeah, it was a long time coming, but now it's clear, innit? I mean, what else would set of his rage? Filch's threats at the start of the story were mere precursors of what was to come.  Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 21 04 Aug 2008 6:48 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for another chapter! I really enjoyed it, though it was hard to read in a way...with Harry and Severus both so upset. I was proud of Harry though, for telling Sirius the truth even if Sirius isn't understanding or believing it yet.

    My heart broke for Severus...I can only imagine how he feels right now. For him, it's his worst nightmare. I loved how he was so worried about Harry thinking that Severus would have lied to him.

    And oh, could Sirius have found a better way to threaten Harry than by saying he would tie him up? And he's calling Harry 'boy' too. Sirius doesn't know what memories he's bringing back for Harry, but my goodness...that poor little boy.

    I hope Albus and Severus will find Harry soon, and I hope Treacle Tart is all right!

    Author's Response:

    Treacle's just fine.  I'd never hurt a cat (or cat-cousin)!  Yeah, Sirius found each of Harry's buttons (without meaning to) and pushed them one after the other.  Severus is going to have a hard time settling himself -- and Harry -- down after this, with ever believing they're safe.  He is heartbroken, but he's pushing through that to do what he needs to to get his son back.

    Thanks for the review, Kristeh!

Title: Chapter 21 04 Aug 2008 4:28 pm
Reviewer: rosworms (Signed) [Report This]
    wow. amazing.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 21 04 Aug 2008 3:30 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Sirius is so dead - he is potions ingredients. He may survive this but they will be serving hot chocolate in hell before Severus ever lets him near Harry.

    WooHoo for Harry standing up to Sirius and yelling at him. Looks like that Snape temper is coming out.

    I thought that Severus really is Harry's father - was there a blood adoption?

    Author's Response: There was a blood adoption, though only Snape and Dumbledore know that Harry is really Sev's son, even without it.  Harry doesn't even know.  Yet.  But yes, he does have quite a temper on him, doesn't he?  Snape will be so proud, you know, after he uses Sirius' guts for garters.  (And doesn't that just bring images to the eyes?!)
Title: Chapter 21 04 Aug 2008 2:21 pm
Reviewer: k (Anonymous) [Report This]
    good one

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 20 31 Jul 2008 1:33 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, what a chapter! I loved seeing Harry and Severus reading together at bedtime, and Harry's pride in his progress. They are so good together.

    And then Sirius came in, and though I know he thought he was helping, I fear that he's really done a lot of damage to Harry unintentionally. I wonder what he'll do when he sees that Harry loves his father and that Severus is really good for him (I hope Sirius will be able to see that, anyway). I actually feel a little sorry for Sirius because he does genuinely care for Harry and wouldn't deliberately hurt him. But Harry is still so fragile and he needs Severus so much. And yet for all his fragility, Harry is a tough kid. He'd have to be very strong inside to have survived all the abuse from the Dursleys without being insane or completely ruined. I'm very curious to see what's going to happen next. I can say I wouldn't want to be Sirius when Severus does catch up with him again!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, Kristeh!  Yeah, Harry is a tough little kid.  Very resilient.  If he wasn't, he would, as you said, never have ben able to survive what he went through at the Dursleys with his sanity intact.  And yes, Sirius will have to learn to see how Snape fits into Harry's llife, or else he won't survive the coming confrontation.  Thanks again, and I should have a new chappie out soon.


Title: Chapter 20 30 Jul 2008 6:14 pm
Reviewer: NaiveGhost (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for the update.
    (The cliffhanger was kinda mean ;-)
    Keep writing!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review!  I'm already working on the next chapter, so it should be posted soon.

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