| Title: Lack of Self Preservation and Sparse Amounts of Concentration
| 01 Sep 2023 1:00 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Great chapter, and I love the chapter title! Harry’s comment about recycling was funny. The end of the chapter was perfect. Thanks so much for the quick update!
Thanks for the lovely, angsty chapter. All of the interactions were great. You’ve painted a vivid picture of teenaged Harry. Happy belated birthday!
I liked the interaction between Harry and Severus.
So good to see this updated. I’m loving the banter between Harry and Snape.
| Title: Occlumency Lunacy
| 20 Jun 2023 4:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for posting. An interesting chapter with a lot to think about. ADHD fits in with Harry’s personality and I have always thought that being a horcrux must have affected his personality and brain. Thank you for starting this interesting idea
Thanks for updating!
There was a lot of humorous dialog, beginning with:
"He frowned. 'You’re not serious?'
'Thank Merlin, I am not your godfather.'”
I had to do a double take reading that, lol.
Nice description of Harry feeling overwhelmed.
Thanks so much for updating! The dialogue between Harry and Snape was so funny. I really like that you’re addressing Harry’s mental health. Thanks for the great chapter.
| Title: That's Monopoly
| 26 May 2023 6:52 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Sounds as if the angst is coming back next chapter!
I loathe monopoly myself as it takes so long but interesting to hear the American version of it in this chapter. Thank you for updating
I’m really enjoying this and looking forward to more.
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